Suicide is like ICE
It cuts like a fice
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seriously? ? ? i no enough people have already bagged on you for this but come. you can do better then this.
i think that you should be more serious when you write something like suiceide but if you are just messing around about it it kind of offends me that you would take something so serious and make it silly and funny
The poem is impressive, the suicide not. Very sad to create poems like this. I know you can better.