Monday, June 8, 2020

Suggested Re-Write For A Poem By Valsa George Comments

Rating: 4.5

A woman ran into the balcony
Husband ran behind yelling... "Stop, Honey
Why are you so dumb?
Kindly do not jump
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Bri Edwards 17 July 2022

I wonder which of Valsa'a poems this is aimed at. bri ;) Wes: another departed from PH by.....

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Kim Barney 17 July 2022

Wes has already given you Valsa's poem, which is the first stanza. The second stanza is Wes's re-write. The only thing missing is the title of Valsa's original poem.

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