Tuesday, May 13, 2014

Sugar Waves Comments

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The sub sparkles like sugar on the lake
Dazzling before my eyes
Which are also blinded by the sun
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Janie Wassler
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Anand Brown 13 May 2014

Lovely poem, engaging and absorbing :)

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magic of nature is o.k. but sugar in the lake not understood and in anyway it is a nice poem.

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