Wednesday, March 5, 2014

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My teeth that used to bite have long lost the fight.
My hair that once was gray has now become white.
My eyesight is cloudy yet my liver spots shine bright.
I can barely walk two blocks before my knees give out.
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Elena Plotkin
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Bri Edwards 24 February 2015

going to my showcase shortly, at A Showcase For PH Poets on my PH site. thanks. bri :)

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Adheez Van Der Beanthz 24 March 2014

interesting poem the flow and the rhyme melt perfectly make this poem very enjoyable to read love it so much

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