Sunday, August 24, 2014

Sugar Lies Comments

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I had a dream
Of tongues labouring for truth
Of the axeman in dilemma
Of a man who had no evil
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Charles Jagongo
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Roseann Shawiak 04 September 2014

Fantastic poem, I really love it! ! Especially the last verse: They lie in every inch of open mouths All sugar to ears. The truth for freedom sacrifice Call it another name dilemma persists Sugar of lies ruling the world. You speak such perfect truth in this poem. Great flow of rhythm throughout the poem, love how you equate lies to sugar to the ears! Very unique statement! ! Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Charles Jagongo

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