Friday, June 3, 2016

Suffocated With Your Thoughts Comments

Rating: 3.5

How can I control myself
from thinking about you,
how can I restrict myself
from talking to you,
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Pranayee Rachamalla
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Kishore Kumar Das 03 June 2016

As a poem you have translated your strong obsessions into verses.......in a touching style......really heart-touching......but life is short-lived and suffocation is definitely not the reward for love!

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thank you for commenting as well as for reading sir!

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