Tuesday, June 2, 2020

Suffocated Comments

Rating: 4.9


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Kewayne Wadley
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Both suffocated each other in smoking....succinct yet very magnificent.....10++

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M Asim Nehal 22 July 2020

Profound poem on smoking. Nice work my friend.10++

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Edward Kofi Louis 22 July 2020

Smoking is a bad habit! ! ! ! ! ⚠️🚭 Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Dr Antony Theodore 22 July 2020

He grabbed her neck & clung on tight, short and meaningful evil that creeps in.. tony

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Mahtab Bangalee 22 July 2020

Smoking detrimental to health...........well to liner sad story teller.......congrats.....10+ from me

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Mahtab Bangalee 22 July 2020

smoke the flame evaporating this journey decaying the moment of the age but endlessly nowhere the glittering around of four walls but, grey the dust of hope barrier in the throat tunnel suffocation dancing in near nano second

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Bernard F. Asuncion 22 July 2020

A well crafted poem of the day. Short yet powerful. Congrats on your featured piece.....10+++

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Kewayne Wadley

Kewayne Wadley

Groton, Connecticutt
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