Wednesday, October 22, 2008

Suffocated Comments

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My soul is suffocated, my spirit cannot breath,
They’re desperately trying to find a way to leave,
They’re dying inside me, fading away,
I know I should help them, but I want them to stay.
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lindsey ashton
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Howard Johnson 24 October 2008

Wow this is deep and well though out write, Lindsey, Have you ever thought about going to short stories'? Sure looks like you a tallent to write, Thank you for sharing, ,

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