Thursday, June 7, 2007

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And here is where
I store the flour and rice.
And here the silverware.
Here the bread, slice by slice.
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Sonny Rainshine
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Great piece Sonny! Your metaphor was unexpected from the beginning of the poem kind of like a candy surprise.

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Derrick Clark 07 June 2007

this is a very good write, keep it up.

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