~sufficiency Comments

adeline, just browsing poemhunter i decided to read a poem of yours. i resonate with your statement here of the concept of enough. on matters of craft, you rhyme well. on the meter, i wonder if you've considered working at getting the whole of this poem in iambics. some examples: line 1 It's not my dream to see line 3 Nor ask of fame to fondle me for as i read the poem something in me has to make an adjustment where i encounter other meters. anyway, thank you for posting the poem, for the reminder to seek for ourselves, for the whole world, our daily bread. glen kappy

A wonderful message to 'the world of not enough'. I love the rhyme, melody and rhythm in the poem.

An extremely well penned poem read with rare delight and much joy. I wonderful theme, style and excellent professional skills. Terence

I ask not spacious lands to own But a place to lay my head, That I may call the world my home Fantastic. Beautiful positivity has been implied to the innermost meaning of life. If human race could be able to think this way, the civilization would get a bit more time to exist otherwise.....! Nice poem overall. Regards, pranab k chakraborty