Thursday, July 31, 2008

Sufferings Comments

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Mother Earth looks at
her sons, soaked in red
lying on her bare bed..
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Deepti Agarwal
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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 25 September 2009

god would be confused to see what man does...the tiny little thing he is....trying to over power one another using terrorism and violence....10

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Jyoti Saxena 12 August 2008

what better way to xpress yr pain deepti -much is said in so less a words. it is an irony that the best piece of poetry comes from a pained heart.my eyes have become numb with tears.

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rohit sapra 09 August 2008

This poem holds lot of truth as suffering is really evident in planet earth in today's world. Violence also has been added to through terrorism which is the major reason why mother earth is suffering. You expressed your point of view so nicely in this poem of yours.

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Sathyanarayana M V S 31 July 2008

Very well said. We need more such poems sathya narayana

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