Suffering Comments

Fantastic piece of work....Loved it...

For God's sake, called she back and delivered this beautiful poem.Muito Lindo! ! ! ! !

Awesome job, very vivid images. The expression of anguish is compelling.

SINCERELY EMOTIONAL..... I guess all of us can relate to varying degrees with u on this, i like your control of words n emotions, again, very good....

nice....short but cute words

Not bad; an explicit expression of sad feelings.

its a lovely peace of poetry...i love how you use your words to express the emotions of pain, and how you feel so gutted and shattered, thats how you feel in an instant when you lose someone you love...well done

Its a nice poem.good creativity and perfect use of best words to express the persona's emotions.keep it up.

Whilst i can see the pain, the poem is not an enjoyable read. It is full of 'I' and 'My' but says little to desribe what it was about the girl that made you love her. It is very 'woe is me'. To quote a well known saying 'Laugh and the whole world laughs with you, cry and you cry alone'

I can feel your emotion in this poem.

Yes, I can read you are really suffering...you've carried over the emotion very well, and what an ending!

I love this poem. When i read it i can really feel the suffering. Great job on conveying your feelings so well. I really liked it.

very emotional and deep