Monday, October 31, 2011

Suffering Comments

Rating: 5.0

My heart has been shattered by my broken dreams.
My sadness has been to its extreme,
How can my beloved love shatter my own world?
What is this life?
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Vivek Haldar
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Indranil Bhaduri 04 October 2012

Fantastic piece of work....Loved it...

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Poetheart Morgan 03 October 2012

For God's sake, called she back and delivered this beautiful poem.Muito Lindo! ! ! ! !

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Edwin Xander 04 November 2011

Awesome job, very vivid images. The expression of anguish is compelling.

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Geoffrey Ngoima Ndegwa. 03 November 2011

SINCERELY EMOTIONAL..... I guess all of us can relate to varying degrees with u on this, i like your control of words n emotions, again, very good....

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Dead Leaf 01 November 2011

nice....short but cute words

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Raymond Uyok 01 November 2011

Not bad; an explicit expression of sad feelings.

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Kaila George 01 November 2011

its a lovely peace of poetry...i love how you use your words to express the emotions of pain, and how you feel so gutted and shattered, thats how you feel in an instant when you lose someone you love...well done

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Felix John 01 November 2011

Its a nice poem.good creativity and perfect use of best words to express the persona's emotions.keep it up.

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To Windward 01 November 2011

Whilst i can see the pain, the poem is not an enjoyable read. It is full of 'I' and 'My' but says little to desribe what it was about the girl that made you love her. It is very 'woe is me'. To quote a well known saying 'Laugh and the whole world laughs with you, cry and you cry alone'

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Richard McClellan 31 October 2011

I can feel your emotion in this poem.

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Jacqui Broad 31 October 2011

Yes, I can read you are really suffering...you've carried over the emotion very well, and what an ending!

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Brooke Harris 31 October 2011

I love this poem. When i read it i can really feel the suffering. Great job on conveying your feelings so well. I really liked it.

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Pondering6649 H 31 October 2011

very emotional and deep

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