You say I must leave the past behind
abandon those dreams within my mind
forget all those things we'd left unsaid
circling like vultures in my head
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Such a beautiful way of illustrating the need to retain the feeling of loss as it is so entwined sometimes with love and history. The last verse especially.
This poem is filled with so much pain, sadness... it's heartbreaking but beautifully written. Your words offer vivid imagery and evoke much emotion in this reader. Neil, as ever, your words touch me deeply. Thanks for sharing this with me... Nadine