Monday, September 29, 2008

Suffer In Silence Comments

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You say I must leave the past behind
abandon those dreams within my mind
forget all those things we'd left unsaid
circling like vultures in my head
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Neil Graham Marsden
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Nadine Miller 07 August 2015

This poem is filled with so much pain, sadness... it's heartbreaking but beautifully written. Your words offer vivid imagery and evoke much emotion in this reader. Neil, as ever, your words touch me deeply. Thanks for sharing this with me... Nadine

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Vicki May 09 February 2013

Such a beautiful way of illustrating the need to retain the feeling of loss as it is so entwined sometimes with love and history. The last verse especially.

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