Sue My Heart Comments
Beneath the somber deeds of thought
I obstinated my self and vend my heart
Before my hands reached to you in the night to call
My eyes saw thy serene joy emptying my soul
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I LIKE this! It is a delightful, fascinating poetic depiction of falling in love. Beautiful! I love especially the concluding line about her wistful smile....saving you by sueing your heart? The entire description of falling in love, as you've thus painted it, is very interesting and I quite enjoyed it.
good poem it shows ur true thoughts and fellings
nice poem... a poem that is written from the heart, really thought of and especially just freshly felt is incomparable...
Romantic...Sentimental...Written with an urge in the heart.. very good. Keep the spirit flowing like this. Love is eternal..
Beautiful, a deep heart feeling expressed dear friend at your age this is a very mature pience of poetry wish you all succes in future
A heart felt piece of writing. A learning curve for love.
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7/28/2025 7:08:04 AM # 1.0.0
good piece brother! i really loved it.