Wednesday, June 1, 2016

Suddenly Marooned Comments

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The clouds gathered and the sun withdrew,
The raindrops fell right on through.
The puddles formed beneath my feet,
A welcome respite from the heat.
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Elena Plotkin
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Bri Edwards 20 February 2018

i fell into a bucket of reddish paint and was suddenly marooned! ! ! bri ;) ok, i see i read it before, left a comment, and mentioned using it in a showcase; i don't believe i used it! but this time i'll leave myself a note to do so! ! ! it IS priceless! ! bri :)

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Bri Edwards 10 March 2017

to MyPoemList. and i'm tempted to use it in my/our showcase soon. i actually 'love' this poem. it displays the silliness of ALL WOMEN! ! ! they are always getting themselves into pickles and expecting men to bail them out. just joking above. hee-hee. keep writing. and if you get the urge to bake: i DO adore chocolate chip and walnut cookies! no shells, please. bri :)

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