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dark clouds fiery
mar the sun
and the sky,
this is Kerala.
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I have written "a gust of wind /washes /the clouds away." I did not write "a gust of wind / chases /the clouds away." Deliberately. Hope my fellow poets understand
Guest of wind always sways away rain to some other area.Enjoyed your depiction of rain saunter
Windswept clouds take your rains away. Is it the wind's vagabond nature (in Sanskrit wind is called ‘Anila' meaning the one that does not stay at one place)
I cite your last three lines: It has rained cats and dogs elsewhere but not in Kerala! Sweetest created, excellenly worded. Home Sweet Home, Your Kerala, the most beautiful. TOP Marks
Try to visit Kerala at least once, if you have not yet
While during the monsoons, it rains cats and dogs all over kerala, the gods own country, the pre-monsoon showers might play hide and seek..
The superb imagery of this beautiful write transported me to a wonderful place, Kerala. A well crafted poem so beautifully expressed.
Thank you Rose Marie for your time and sharing the observations
Kerala is one place everyone should visit. At least once in her/his life time. If you love rains, make it during the monsoon: June to September
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8/2/2025 5:27:07 PM # 1.0.0
Nature is mysterious and wonderful. Beautiful poem!
Who can fathom the mystery of nature?