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Broken and fixed - this was very powerful. And the last two lines I loved. s

Appreciate the pauses in this great write, can capture the mood. Thank you

strong feelings for such a piro soul.

Good friend always help their friends to cry Hmmm, I love the sound of that phrase. Got me thinking. Short yet fulll of life. Beautifully penned

The abrupt swings of mind and mood have been portrayed well in this poem. An excellent work! I may be wrong, but I would like to interpret the last two lines of your poem differently from some of the poets who commented. I would like to think that you meant good friends play a cathartic role, by helping the afflicted to cry and relieve him, to some extent at least, of the grief or sorrow or void feelings.

Good friends always help... nice poem come to rescue pay the due ad review if you are in trouble....10

Hello Poet our mind is a trap.... we think too much and we gets lost in it.... and it does not give us all the answers... feel your heart and dispense your objectivity... Open and shut your feelings....I love it...

Human mind is so erratic... Sudden is the change of mood and there is a lot of incongruity to be percieved in our thoughts as well as in life.... The last lines are a shocking revelation.... we all experience it one time or the other.... When friends quicken the flow of tears... It is unbearable and we are bewildered by the antagonism of life.... A great write! !

Your write rattles on, like a train chugging down the winding track.....a mind spilling fragments...click, clack, clack! I loved it's intensity of how the mind works! And your last line should be applauded, devices! PEACE

Good friends always help ................their friends to cry. Agreed upto some extent. But if it happens so life is lost. A good friend is a good foe if accepted and practically happens so except in rare cases due to which the life is continuing. I regard your emotions and thoughts.

such a very emotional peace of writting, written in such away you can put yourself in this situation and emotions and just fit and feels the real poetry runs through your vains as it invades your feeling and thoughts.

A poem expressing rapidly changing emotions - not uncommon for some of us. The last lines are perhaps the most touching. Friends are supposed to stop our tears, not encourage them. This is where most friends fail. Well done, a 10 from me.

An interesting write. Emotion filled. Well done!

I believe when you wrote this, you let the emotion go along with your words as well, because i follow the echoes and the feeling as much as.... length you giving here..well done_Soul

Many emotions in one poem, a fantastic write.

A beautiful poem..............................