Friday, May 18, 2012

Suddenly Comments

Rating: 4.4

When love suddenly dies
Without reason or call,
Signs of silence break ties
Breaths no longer rise,
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Adrianne Quinlan
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Colleen Courtney 19 June 2014

A very soul stirring poem. The real beauty is that though one may break your heart, another can come along and help to make it whole again! : -)

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Savita Tyagi 19 June 2014

Lovely poem with depth and tenderness. If a person is loving by nature love would be reignited in heart against all odds.

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* Sunprincess * 19 June 2014

...........congratulations on poem of the day....truly everything must have a beginning and an ending....

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Leslie Philibert 19 June 2014

Good write; but you break the rhyme scheme in the third stanza! Why?

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Terence Collings 19 June 2013

A beautifully expressed piece of universal truth.! !

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Patricia Grantham 19 June 2013

A truly enjoyed write Adrienne. When love dies feels like the whole world comes crashing down. On the other hand when it grows it flourishes and shines bright as the noon day. A thoughtful write.

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A really engaging piece. Awesome write. :)

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Mark Walters 19 June 2012

I loved this poem. It's very stirring, very deep. Thanks, mark walters

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Mark Dillon 19 June 2012

touching, nice and simply written, nice one

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Captain Cur 19 June 2012

An experience we have all shared excellently composed in this poem, with a meaningful positive ending. Great write.

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Thomas Duncky 19 June 2012

Great write Adrianne. Love the point edge of your style. Keep up

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Jasbir Chatterjee 19 June 2012

fantastic poem...yes, love like a wild plant often grows in strange nooks and corners out of sheer will...

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Romeo Della Valle 27 May 2012

Beauty and Talent magically merged in this well penned write! Bravo! Love it! 10+++Your potential is clearly shown in this amazing write! Thank you for sharing and keep it up! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City!

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