Wednesday, October 8, 2008

Suddenly Comments

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Suddenly,
it’s summer

We’ve barely got to grips with it
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NAYYAR SHABBIR AHMAD
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Firefly Girl 08 October 2008

This is great! I am new to this site, but I want to express that I love your self-expressions within your poem. It (seasonal change) seemed to happen overnight, in my eyes, too, I was just barely getting warmed by the sunshine! I like the brevity of your poem, too - it is very well written. FireFly Girl

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Lahore, Pakistan
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