Sudden Shocking Comments

Beautiful Flow of words from your pen Amir. Even warm tea will be cold in advanced flasks. Creative writing...Loved reading each lines....

God created truthful and virtuous creatures but is shocked to see them deceitful and devious.............very creative writing.......................

Wo....w! ! ! ! this one is wonderful....i read ur other poems too but this one made me really interested! i like ur view and the idea of this poem is awesome...Even warm tea will be cold in advanced flasks...this line is perfect! and let me tell u sth, my friend! God is like light...if our God was like darkness he could only create darkness....but he is like light....means he can cuase both darkness and light...in fact the lack of darkness cant be light but the lack of light is darkness.......and the lack of God in the hearts is the reason of all of the cruelty that we have in our world.......

I recommend 'His creatures' be changed to 'these creatures'. It sounds better this way (I think) . You have some creative potential. Thanks for the poem.