Sudden Death Of Autumn Comments

True Enjoyable Poem, with or without coffee, this remains still an excellent poem, with melancholy to the disappearing Autumn. Fascinating Autumnal Song, winter can be loveliest if you reside in Serfaus, Austria. Keep the pen wet, poet and start again let flow the ink. I have enjoyed very much. A 10 Full Score for the Vote.

A beautifully heart touching poem! .. Powerfully and beautifully expressed! .. Ever so very many 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++

Attempt no.2 - A lovely read all the way through now. So much better without the coffee! ! ! ! ! ! I do love coffee though. Ten out of ten for this one. Regards Ernestine.

So much better and a smooth read all the way.through. .Well done with this one. Ten out of ten. Regards Ernestine

Grey Winter arrives all too soon, Made worse by Daylight Savings Time. Days are wrapped in clouds of gloom Devoid of candescent sunshine.- - great perception, , , , , , , , , and expression of the change of seasons . beautiful poem indeed dear poet. tony

A wonderful descriptive write of how one feels when winter comes and starts to paint a different picture? ....well penned Tan.

The changing of the seasons is a natural thing that happens every year, as we each grow a year older. Fall is my favorite season, and I don't much like winter, but it is necessary so that we can appreciate the other seasons! An enjoyable poem! Thanks for inviting me to read it. You may like my poems THE ANGRY STORM and ROOFTOP STRONGHOLD.

An excellent poem, enjoyed the flow and vision

Hi Tan, I would say that this is a very, very well written piece. The coffee lines seem a bit out of place among the rest of the storylines and are left dangling somewhat with no support.but, it is very well put together and I enjoyed reading it, very much, .. With Regards Ernestine, lovely to hear from you.

A superb write with the revenge of winter stealing Autumn's glory of colours galore, I love the beautiful rhythm and rhyming and thank you for inviting me to read your superb write! !

Your image of the trees in the second stanza remind me of the Ash tree at the bottom of my garden. Brilliant image. The only line I would question is the second one in the fourth stanza. The rhythm is out of kilter.. I'd amend that to though drinking coffee from a filter.. Otherwise, your poem is really very good and describes my feelings exactly. I see you are a coffee drinker like me, by the way. We need it at this time of the year!

It only needs one day for the beauty of colour to be gone! A good poem. A 10

Winter is coming and it's going to be a cold one. A great poem.