Sudden Death Comments

Free flow of emotioms makes one a great poet. Best wishes suzan

'I lay me down here-Dead as dead' would have been how i would have ended the last verse of this poem. This piece was excellently written. I had to give it a tenner kind sir of the written word. God bless all poets-MJG.

what kind of experience has made one so young so bitter. thats what my family all say to me whenever these kind of things pass my mind. maybe i should be myself more. just allow myself free emotions... this poem is very thought provoking. the title itself got me thinking. maybe i should just live for the now, for myself. sudden death.......