Tuesday, October 28, 2014
Such Condition Comments
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Yes, you will be alone
Dejected and Lone
With no desire to live more
Life had more satire
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal
28 October 2014
clipped, doesn't flow well Monica Hoover1 minute ago i think you left out the little words for the creative structure but it doesn't flow well at all without them. the over-all concept is great, keep working on your structure and rhythm.
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