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the ups and down, the dawn and dusk, the love and pain....all together life's paradoxical reality penned beautifully! We love home we do not love we love whom we do not love we like get into we like get out! 10++++

certainly thats the right attitude..... we are just being human....sometimes..our action doesn't conform to what our mind wants.... you have target the cherry balls .... your poem is a real true to life experience..... very nice indeed.....i believe this poem should be put in every library.....very urgent to read by the student...it talks about being a child in us.... and a student today.... and a guide of one self....thank you for inviting me to read your poem

nothing in the world is for free, dear. if you want to achieve something, so you have to sacrifice something, your time, your power, your love etc. just never surrender! could you read mine too? thank you.

Indeed..life is very mysterious.. We couldn't find an answer..even on simple matters of life.. Yet we have to continue..go with the flow as they say... Great poem!

Kaede I know how you feel - it is all too hard! I was given a card yesterday on Destiny. it says 'Destiny is a matter of chance, it is a matter of choice; it is not a thing to be waited for, it is a thing to be achieved'. It is so difficult, but be positive and know you have a future. And I know your writing, such as this poem, helps you. Believe in yourself and know that we all create our own reality and working to be physically fit also helps as it gives you the stamina to work hard. God Bless Karin Anderson

the world is not against you, your thoughts are, so gather them and focus, you'll find the answer yourself....another beautiful write, thanks for sharing 10+++ rgds asif