Such a feeling in my mind
When you say I am your love
I felt this world has belonged to me
I love you today as I will tomorrow
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i don't know if you mean something by(a feelings) , but (a) never comes after it a plural...if you don't mean something by breaking this rule. but the poem is wonderful just don't stop writing....great work :) i give it 10.
good work...liked the affection love and sincerity the poem carries inside...10
nice poem again, but i felt its like the continuation of the poem somewhere of my love....
No matter where ever I am but my love never dies for you a very beautiful lyrical poem, the ideas are well expressed... 10++++++++++