Saturday, November 14, 2009

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Waiting on the day to come around the corner
when i will no the difference between what is true
and when im just being ued.
I'm blind to everything around me
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Nicole Gehrman
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I love this poem too. It is really emotional, and I love the way you word things. It reminds me of some of mine, although this has an uplifting and powerful message, while mine are kinda just depressing.

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The Devils Girl 14 November 2009

i love this alot. i love that you put your whole heart into these peoms and you know i love you so stop being so grr at me. lol but no i love all ur poems and u know tat. i would chang nothing about it.

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Nicole Gehrman

Nicole Gehrman

Colfax, Wisconsin
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