Friday, October 3, 2008

Succumb To Desire Comments

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SUCCUMB TO DESIRE

The look means desire
Feelings like an electric wire
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Morhardt Carmen Mencita Monoi Angel
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Chinedu Dike 15 July 2015

Beautiful train of thoughts, well articulated and insightfully penned with conviction. Indeed desire whirls around ones senses till ones defenses become weak. A good poem with lovely rhyme scheme. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Reshma Ramesh 03 October 2008

neat one........well done

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