Saturday, August 16, 2008

Success Story Fo M 'Lady Ernestine Comments

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She was as timid as a mouse.
Kept firmly under mothers thumb
she very rarely left the house.
Her mother taught her she was dumb.
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Ernestine Northover 31 October 2009

This is like a Aesops Fable, (and the consequence was) ! ! ! ! ! Well done with this one. A lovely storyline and a happy ending which is just what I like. Thanks once again for this gift of poetry. love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Fay Slimm 10 October 2008

What a tale you tell with your poet's pen dear Ivor - I guess you knew who were alluding to and so well expressed, so may the mother's repression now be put to rest......A ten for this with a doubt - you know what writing is all about....

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Thad Wilk 16 August 2008

Great read Ivor! I agree with this poem, profoundly expressed! (Some) mothers don't always - know what is best! ! *10*! ! Friend Thad

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