Monday, November 2, 2015

Success Is... Comments

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Success is not just money...
But it is when you learn how to use it!
Success is not just having bungalow...
But living peacefully in that bungalow!
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Heenal Vora
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Chinedu Dike 23 February 2018

A creative and compelling composition with insight into the nature and intricacies of success, crafted in persuasive diction. A beautiful creation, focussed and factual. Thanks for sharing Heenal.

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Dr Antony Theodore 07 January 2016

But living peacefully in that bungalow! But also living it mental But getting knowledge out of it! Buts hitting for what you were bounced! So many wonderful ideas . you are true when you write about success. full of insight, a very nice poem. thank you. tony

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Abderrahmane Dakir 01 January 2016

I like the contrast in this poem. Thank you for sharing.

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Bharati Nayak 04 November 2015

You are on stepping stone for success.Truly a beautiful poem.Thanks for sharing.

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Seema Jayaraman 03 November 2015

Success is not reaching higher levels, but completing smaller levels.. A good reminder when we get too focussed on the end goal in our never ending rat race. Thanks Heenal.

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Heenal Vora 03 November 2015

Thanks vivek :)

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Kelly Kurt 02 November 2015

As with many concepts, Success is highly subjective. Thanks, Heenal

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Heenal Vora 02 November 2015

Thanks shakil

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Heenal Vora 02 November 2015

Yes siddharth

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Siddharth Suchak 02 November 2015

Ya its all true..... May u too get success😃😃😃

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Fabrizio Frosini 02 November 2015

Success will unfold by crossing the silence - a good concept thanks for sharing, Heenal, and keep writing

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Harshit Sheth 02 November 2015

Heenal you have made it so easy for us to understand what is real Success..! Its not easy to define success., but you did so., Great Job.! God Bless You!

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Shakil Ahmed 02 November 2015

really, success is not an ordinary thing, it is something very deep in meaning, , i enjoyed reading the poem, thanks for sharing, if you find time please read some of my poems and leave your comments.

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Heenal Vora 02 November 2015

Yes sure thanks a lot for your comment

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