Wednesday, March 19, 2014

Success At Last Comments

Rating: 5.0

Equipped for failure
Yet he didn’t fail
He took on the world
Spread his wings full sail
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Lento Maez
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Khairul Ahsan 30 March 2014

Very nice, both the penning of the poem and taking on the troubles of life squarely, and ultimately achieving 'success at last'! Well done.10/10. I wonder though how you were 'equipped for failure'. 'And I have to confess That boy was me' - The end of suspense! Congratulations on your achieving 'Success At Last'!

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