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" Many more new thoughts that comes in mind" i'd use " .e to mind" or " ..e into my mind" st.2 to keep mind/bind rhyme, i'd use " do bind" [or did you mean " blind" ? ? ] And " shining" , not shinning. Last stanza is 'alright', but perhaps you reached too much for rhymes? I think a poet's drive to rhyme sometimes makes the poem less strong. bri ;)

Another well written poem Naila!

Yes success is not far for those who try and strive hard.5* There are ups and downs in life There are times to play the fife All you need to sit and smile Success is waiting for you at a mile! !

Very positive poem. Need to face the ups and down of life with a smile.

Beautifully penned. There are ups and downs in life There are times to play the fife All you need to sit and smile Success is waiting for you at a mile! ! . Good synopsis.

new thoughts that comes in mind thnx thoughts do come to mind after along tyme