Tuesday, October 31, 2006

Succeed Comments

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Have you ever wanted to succeed more then anything
Have you ever tried so hard it felt like you should be king
Have you conquered anyone who stood in your path
Have you never looked back forgetting your past fiery wrath
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Jay Press
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Quite a roller coaster as we spin through the rhymes, pushing this desire for success.

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Howard Johnson 31 October 2006

This is a great write to have so much rhyme-ing in it.Fun to read.

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