Wednesday, April 4, 2007

Subway Train Comments

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subway train winding down the track
new people (but the same)
at every stop
children laughing
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Ah, we are all travelers trying to get somewhere, huh? I like the way you infused this poem with the beat of a subway. Very, very effective.

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Yashar rezaeipour 09 April 2007

like our lifes, knowing no difference, thanks! yashar

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