Friday, January 16, 2015

Subway Love Comments

Rating: 4.8

Your love is like a subway
I wait here for my turn
And only underground
Will my love for you be returned
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Beatrice Preti
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Fabrizio Frosini 18 October 2015

a poignant write, Beatrice. A poem to be read without breathing.. Thanks for sharing

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Beatrice Preti 18 October 2015

mille grazie!

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Khairul Ahsan 05 April 2015

A nice thought, well penned. Well done!

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Leslie Sharp 16 January 2015

Love is like a subway going this way, that way a never ending path that needs to grow!

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Chinedu Dike 16 January 2015

A beautiful train of thoughts, well articulated and nicely encapsulated into a love and romantic poem. It's a lovely narrative piece written in poetic diction. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Soumita Sarkar 16 January 2015

what a sacrifice.....! ! ! what a safe heaven for lovers..... subway den...liked the thought and the feel......

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