Saturday, March 14, 2009

Suburban Soul In The Upstream Comments

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The dark river is deep like life
And of course he cannot swim well.
Shore is very far like heaven
And she waves her red handkerchief.
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nimal dunuhinga
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Alison Cassidy 21 March 2009

You express the struggle of star-crossed lovers with great eloquence in this beautiful poem. I'm sure Romeo and Juliet would enjoy reading this poem. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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kalubovila East, Sri Lanka
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