Wednesday, June 24, 2015

Suburban Comments

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Conformity caught here, nobody catches it,
Lawns groomed in prose, with hardly a stutter.
Lloyd hits the ball, and Lorraine fetches it.
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Michael Blumenthal
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Kelly Kurt 24 June 2015

To most, this conformity is comfort, the bliss of ignorance. To poets, such as yourself, this is a stagnancy that crushes creativity and purpose. Wind up the suburb and it runs, preprogrammed. Delicious piece, Michael. Thanks for sharing. Peace

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