Friday, April 17, 2009

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The birds fly,
south of these lands.
Foolish to think such things.
A crayon does speak my mind,
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Jordan Salinas
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Aylissa Ramirez 29 April 2009

crayons speak my mind also but not in the way they speak yours :) very nice poem.

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Jordan Crider 17 April 2009

wow dude, deep... i understand though, A crayon does speak my mind, and a pencil does see my suit my favorite line. i understand how your mind is in your art with your crayons, and not with the humdrum pencil life of all school offers. good job!

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