Thursday, July 21, 2005

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Rating: 3.5

An indispensable moment,
Draped in poise,
Cradled me
In its enormous influence,
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Pamela Davison
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Max Reif 21 July 2005

There's some beautiful and haunting language here. Just when I feel it's too vague, you complete a thought and give me a whole picture even though there IS no concrete picture. Interesting. I'm still not certain whether you're talking abouta particular architect, in the 3rd stanza, or God.

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