Thursday, November 16, 2017

Submission Comments

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Why did you prolong the truths?
Did you think I'd knock it out of you?
Pin you down, til you whimper in silent renditions!
By a technique of tug of war with your tongue?
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Bree Z Love
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Dr Antony Theodore 11 December 2017

Holding you up, my captive to my loin, using the weapon. Made you purge this time, now humiliated........it was n o easy submission........ comparisons, difficulties... love emotions, feelings. final submission..... thank you dear poetess. you are great in your writings.. tony

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Binayakumar Mohanty 17 November 2017

Defeated in annhilation It was no easy submission.Thanks for sharing.

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Bree Z Love

Bree Z Love

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