Submarine Comments

although this poem, is deep, it made me smile at the same time. it's very lyrical which is always great and ' i believe in the sun i've never seen' is the line i think is the most beautiful line <3

sooner or later we all drown I think. Lets just make the best of life! Still it is scary to think that this air will not fill your lungs and that everything will turn into darkness of white where emptyness might by awaiting and only the memories will play again and again... I love this poem pretty good!