Thursday, January 14, 2016
Subliminal Surge Comments
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Crowned with thorns in place of insight
Subdued and cursed with empty delight
The knowledge they sell is far from the light
Chained by norms with no will to fight
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Emmanuel Odum
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Fabrizio Frosini
17 January 2016
interesting write, Emmanuel, but maybe, in blank verse (without the need of finding a rhyme to complete each line) , you'd express your feelings even better. This is just my point of view, of course ;)
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7/26/2025 3:07:48 AM # 1.0.0
Such a nice poem, Emmanuel. Read my poem, Love and L u s t. Thanks.