Sublime Syrup Comments

For medication we make syrup and for making some sweet dishes too. But more important syrup we need is wisdom of God. This is great write.

A poem with the greatest topic of all- our Lord God creator of all things good! ! ! Thank you! !

God's wisdom is sweet and sublime syrup, This protects during birth and death And during life's process and journey, When there is sunrise there is sunset, _A great write in praise of God.

Nature is the greatest invitation to Him, sunrise especially. Well said.

I like the second stanza very much...specially the lines 'God is the greatest attractive personality, We are ever attracted towards him, His invitation we find through sunrise, His greatest teaching we receive...a beautiful imagery that sunrise is God's invitation...great poem..thanks a lot for all your comments on my poems Kumar

A beautiful ode to the glory of God and creation. Indeed the world is a miracle in itself. When there is sunrise there is sunset, If a flower blooms then this wilts too, A deeply moving poem. Kudos.

God's wisdom is sweet and sublime syrup, This protects during birth and death And during life's process and journey, Sublime thoughts put in meaningful verse!

God's wisdom is sweet and sublime syrup, This protects during birth and death And during life's process and journey, So beautifully thought and worded, full of wisdom. Kumarmani ji, My Namaskar!

The invisible nectar of wisdom! A perfect vision, a perfect verse Kumarmani.

Life, Greatest Charmer! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

fortunately sunbeams more benign than boiling water