Thursday, October 9, 2014

Sublime ? Comments

Rating: 5.0

I wonder what i'll have learned
by the time I meet my death..
Will every second have counted,
or only the last breath?
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Linda A
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Roseann Shawiak 14 December 2014

What an amazing poem Leila, I truly loved it! You are so honestly explicit and I totally love that about this poem! Your analogies are superb, you speak clearly to my mind and heart and have touched both gently with your words. Thank you so very much for sharing. I give it 10 - 10's! ! RoseAnn

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 01 November 2014

An impressive poem in excellent rhyme pattern, great muse on the last breath and wondr of what the afterlife is wow! I admired every stanza esp the last. So nice to read yor latest. Hope u read mine too.

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