Friday, June 20, 2008

Subconsciousness Corrupted Comments

Rating: 4.5

Spawned within decaying carcasses of dying flies
Feasting upon the fetid flesh of the obstinate
Lubricious, slithering, sly force ever obdurate
Devouring innocence with poignant, pernicious lies
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Mark Crane
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Tanya Stanford 11 September 2008

Brilliant use of words to express the deepness of this poem. Scary mental pictures. Well done on this one.

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Leela Devi 20 June 2008

deep thoughts...........................what next

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Mark Crane

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Williams Town Australia
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