Friday, January 18, 2008

Subconscious Emanations Comments

Rating: 5.0

Delicately disturbed -
Frail clouds of sand particles
Obscure vision
In a limpid pool
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leonard daranjo
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Abha Sharma 23 April 2008

A fully articulated rational thought describing the levels of awareness, unending flow of sensations, thoughts…. Thoughtful oxymoron in the lines…..’Obscure vision In a limpid pool’ The lines are graced with deep psychological studies of the mind and its functioning I enjoy reading such mind teasers…..

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Sandra Fowler 18 January 2008

If the eyes are indeed the windows of the soul, someday we just might see forever. A beautiful penning, Leonard. As always, Sandra

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