Monday, April 28, 2008

Styx Comments

Rating: 5.0

Life is good! ! So is coffee
my only chance to submerge
the Achilles within me
in the Styx of bitterness!
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Rehan Hyder
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Marieta Maglas 25 May 2009

analogy of the human heart and its Achille's heal suggests human sensitivity. A very well written poem 10++

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Abha Sharma 28 April 2008

that's why many a times we have to give ourselves to brains rather than heart...the analogy of human heart to achille's heal is just wonderful....succinct and meaningful...

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Indira Babbellapati 28 April 2008

there's a very short poem i wrote once on the way we live n die...this reminds me of it...for most of us our heart of which we know lil or nothing is the achilles heal...

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