Monday, April 20, 2009

Style Statement Comments

Rating: 5.0

A near perfect face
Exuding a touch of grace
A Cleopatra-like long neck
Enhanced with delicate jewellery
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Sandra Martyres
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Patti Masterman 25 August 2009

Possibly she could become addicted to the attention. Has never been problem for yours truly. Haha, great story of a poem. I can just see the femme fatale in my line of vision.

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Ted M 23 August 2009

On one hand you dazzle us with amazing beauty and on the other you point out the dark reality effectively showing us the two sides in the same stroke. The artistic talent in you has created such a picture that it almost overshadows the point you want to make. I'm having a hard time trying to clear that scene from my screen........10

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Michael Harmon 25 May 2009

Nicely-expressed, Sandra. The poem itself has a graceful style. :)

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Saadat Tahir 13 May 2009

hi sandra its a very nice poem...deals with the folly of todays truisms.. thanx for giving us this beauty cheers

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C. P. Sharma 03 May 2009

A true modern Cleopatra to ' launch a thousand ships'. Style is the woman and I love it. CP

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Vidi Writes 25 April 2009

Beauty has the power to play 'Who cares where she comes from' Very intelligent say... The look and the style, that rule. Its in the mind of the one who looks. Care only for the style and beauty then pay the price for it That's why its said a game a gamble. Good theme. Thank you dear poet.

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Ken E Hall 22 April 2009

Extremely nice portrait with your wordwork+++++10 but in these poor economic times she will have to marry for love thanks for the read regards uavanice1

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Allemagne Roßmann 21 April 2009

Is it your statement for shaadi.com or jeevansaathi.com forums? Is it directing to your stances? Then i must say there are men far taller, wider and strengthier as British.We ruled the world all over and still ruling with colonies like Spikes(US-Brits) ....Saffas(South Africans) ...Kiwis and Kangaroos, in the east Hongkong(now in China after 2003) ...et al... What are you doing there in the country of craps? There are men beyond your limits of vision and imagination.... May be i start last but from there itself.... A 10+++++++++++ for you for making a platform for showing off masculinity.

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Muhammad Ali 21 April 2009

Brilliant approach Sandra very nice piece of work! 10+ -Ali

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Sathyanarayana M V S 21 April 2009

I can dare say, you are faaaar better poet that Maya Angeola, in descirbing a woman. You never cross the limits of romantic levels to reach obsenity and your portrayal has been always very dignified, sweet and touching. Let people throw stones at me.............(Maya's fans) .........I don't care. You are the best. I tried a couple of poems A THING OF BEAUTY, HER SMILE, may be from a man's point of view, how he loooks at a beautiful woman. Your poems are very neat, exact and perfect.

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Meggie Gultiano 21 April 2009

well, it is up to her, really, and that's her style statement..Umm, this is good

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Vaibhav Pandey 21 April 2009

all your poems have great pace which I think is very good....very nice....10

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Kesav Easwaran 21 April 2009

he or she, whoever wins or loses, it's all a gamble game...the life...i liked your presentation style, Sandra...10

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she would i think play the game and extend her career

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Fiona Davidson 20 April 2009

Delightful write Sandra...beautifully written...10+++

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