Sturnella Neglecta Comments
seven syllables per line
try to do it ev'ry time
uncommon pattern, so true
rarely done, but you can, too
...
Read full text
Aha! I see what you did here! In addition to having exactly seven syllables per line and fun rhymes, there are THREE other elements at play here that make this poem nothing short of genius! Should I tell the other readers what they are?
Wonderful names! You both deserve praise! Wonderful job! !
In the poet's notes I asked if anyone knows what this type of poem is called. I have since learned that it is called 'syllabic verse'.
Even me? Maybe I could, and maybe I should! A fun poem; thanks for sharing!
Delivering Poems Around The World
Poems are the property of their respective owners. All information has been reproduced here for educational and informational purposes to benefit site visitors, and is provided at no charge...
7/25/2025 12:06:18 AM # 1.0.0
Dillip, which names are wonderful? When you say 'you both' deserve praise, you meant Belle and who else?