Monday, October 18, 2010

Stupidity Ocean Comments

Rating: 3.5

As i'm taken to meet thee one day
Without any prior permission
Minds will drown that's when I may
But not into my stupidity ocean
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Mohammed Hassan (Piracy In The Mediterranean)
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Rania Hammoud 25 October 2011

You write so far so good..It's a well organized poem and well expressed. Lovely rhyme. I most liked the first stanza and the last triplet.Good job.Go ahead.

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