Saturday, September 19, 2009

*****************stupidity***************1978 Comments

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i was feeling pretty low.
everything went wrong, no matter
which way i'd go.
i felt really down and out
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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 11 January 2010

Ha ha ha climax lies in finish…better to be stupid in this way many many times… 10 Ms. Nivedita UK PS Mature Romantic Stupidity…LOL!

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Scott Daniels 02 October 2009

Very interesting poem. I didn't see the end coming. A nice tongue in cheek poem.

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Shashendra Amalshan 19 September 2009

Hey this is a different one.. I found this one rather amusing.. enjoyed reading your good oldies! ! ! title is very interesting too huh! ! 1 cheers shan

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 19 September 2009

some relationships do start...continue and end that way......

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Catrina Heart 19 September 2009

poignant poem written and expressed so well..........thanks.........

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